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KDice Saga : Fight for survival (Chapter 11)
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unlucky9999 wrote
at 2:19 PM, Saturday September 6, 2008 EDT
Characters: Pierce (jpc4p) - a very promising young Jedi knight, who, unfortunately, is a total drunk.
Muka'poo (mikeypoo) - 1 of the 3 last Jedi Masters, who are still alive and belong to the Jedi Counsel. He's very old, but very wise and still powerful. Cody (Comik) - A young but extremely wise and powerful Jedi master, who keeps his cool in almost any situation. Angela (fishnetangel) - The only female Jedi who has ever been in Jedi Counsel. She's still young, but she was wise enough to get herself into the Counsel. Joshua (Big Jumblies) - One of the students in the Jedi Academy. Pierce's friend Alice (Wicked!) - Lipo'nuf's only student which fled with him. Alice is very gifted, but she never had the chance to prove what she's worth. Lipo'nuf (nuflis) - A very old and wise jedi master. After the Great War and Banishment of the Sith he reatreated to an unknown hyperspace. Captain (captainLAGER) - one of the known leaders of MUSUXO (Mercenary United Solar Urban Xarderphobic Organisation). His true name is long forgotten and people only know by "Captain". Soldier Welsh (grandgnu) - one of the ordinary mercenary soldiers. - "Damn bastards.... NOT AGAIN!... " , - Pierce was furious again. They forgot to give him the box of gurgan they had promised! - " Oh comon! I was only kidding when I called you fags!" But his voice echoed at the rocky landscape. - " What kind of dump is this?! No animals, no food, no rivers and NO alcohol! All I can see are stupid mountains and rocks... I hate this place!" , - Pierce obviously wasn't too happy with the trial. But since there was no one listening to him, he finally decided to explore the planet and find something to drink there. ---------------------------------------------- - "Master, I sense a disturbance in the force. Some people landed in this planet and the Force is strong in them. We must retreat to our safe base in the mountains right now or they will find us!" , - Alice was deeply disturbed. She had not seen any other people (except for her master) for 5 years and such an encounter was not what she wished for. - "My dear Alice, perhaps the time, that I have foreseen, has come" , - master Lipo'nuf coughed. - " I sense some familiar Force movements. These people are our friends, I think, and we shall not hide. And besides, one of them is so strong in force, that he would sense us anyways. I am not what I used to be... Fear not, my child, The Force shall guide us and our destiny shall be what it must be." - " You are so wise, Master. I shall do as you say. I just hope there is nothing that we shall regret..." ---------------------------------------------- - " Is there anyone here? Anyone?" , - Pierce opened another door in an abandoned town which was in a horrible condition. - "Oh comon... There must be a bar or something... Im feeling weak now... I need my dose!" But the town was empty. Pierce, weak and unhappy, left the town and continued to travel south. He did not know why he was going there, but the hand of destiny was guiding him right there. After a few boring and long hours Pierce saw something that gave him a feeling of pure joy. Far, far away the landscape was changing and he saw a huge grassland and a river. - "That river better be made of gurgan" , - and Pierce continued his journey. --------------------------------------------- - " Do you think they will make it?" , - Angela asked. - " I am not sure if this is such a good idea now. That planet is hell! It has dangerous predators... The landscape in most parts of the planet is quite bad as well... Perhaps we should have sent them in pairs?" - " No. If they can not survive and gain strength here, then they are no match for our enemies. IF there is a place where they can mature and become true, tough, strong, smart, and agile jedis, then THIS is the place! You have to understand, Angela, there will not be a second chance. The enemy is strong and it will have no mercy for us. They will either corrupt or destroy us, so we have to be ready. So please, be quiet and let us AND them do their job!" , - this tirade was truly impressive and both Cody and Angela could not have doubted his words. - " And I was right! There is an old friend here. And we shall pay him a visit very soon...." --------------------------------------------- - "Captain, one of our jet fighters have spotted a powerful ship with full equipment and a large squad of smaller ships, quite possibly, with a band of jedi or sith." , - soldier Welsh told the news to the Captain. - "Welsh, my friend told me that they were coming so this is old news. Now scramble. I have more important meetings and work to do. And, most important, a ship to take over..." , - the horrible laugh came from a scarred and damaged man that is still strong enough to hold grudges. Community thread : http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764965 Previous chapters : Prologue (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764045) Chapter 1 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764078) Chapter 2 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764093) Chapter 3 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764134) Chapter 4 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764205) Chapter 5 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764289) Chapter 6 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764394) Chapter 7 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764450) Chapter 8 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764490) Chapter 9 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764582) Chapter 10 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764853) |
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unlucky9999 wrote
at 2:24 PM, Saturday September 6, 2008 EDT I am sorry that it took so long, but I had no time no time to write and I have no idea when the next chapter will come out. I hope you will enjoy it :)
P.s. if anyone will talk about my absence, the only reliable source is nuflis. If you will want to contact me, then, tough luck. |
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nuflis wrote
at 2:57 PM, Saturday September 6, 2008 EDT Ok, back from the hyperspace.
Great chapter man, keep them coming, pls. P.S.: unlucky9999 is training with his country baketball national team, pretty busy now. *hides in the hyperspace again* |
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jurgen wrote
at 4:16 PM, Saturday September 6, 2008 EDT wooooot! a new chapter just in time!
I am going to a conference next week. I already printed the first 10 chapters to read during the speaches of some of the more boring speakers. Now I can add this chapter. Hehe, I wonder if I can keep myself from reading this one before Monday morning. Thanks man and good luck with the basketball training! |
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captainLAGER wrote
at 8:17 AM, Friday September 12, 2008 EDT yay i made the story. and im "still strong enough to hold grudges." zomg.
nice work |
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jurgen wrote
at 4:05 PM, Friday September 12, 2008 EDT Captain (captainLAGER) - one of the known leaders of MUSUXO (Mercenary United Solar Urban Xarderphobic Organisation). His true name is long forgotten and people only know by "Captain".
His true name is not really long forgotten, it's just a bit difficult for the non-German players to remember all the time. |
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Gurgi wrote
at 10:05 PM, Saturday September 19, 2009 EDT :o nice Kbook
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BIG PANDA wrote
at 11:49 AM, Sunday September 20, 2009 EDT uhhhh, what the hell is this?
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skrumgaer wrote
at 12:11 PM, Sunday September 20, 2009 EDT If you want to review all 11 chapters of the kbook as it now stands, go to the eleventh post of Recent Blog Entries on the Forum.
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integraI wrote
at 12:12 PM, Sunday September 20, 2009 EDT I never got why people liked this stuff, I also never got why I was never a character in this.
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skrumgaer wrote
at 12:14 PM, Sunday September 20, 2009 EDT My bad. The thirteenth post, not the eleventh post. If Unlucky9999 ever comes back to continue the book, I will move the archive post to the front.
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