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Kdice Saga : Urgent issues (Chapter 3)
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unlucky9999 wrote
at 2:07 PM, Monday August 4, 2008 EDT
Characters : Royal Historian Kviz (kwizatz) - The Royal Historian of planet Xatris, who works for the Royal Seat and has a huge influence for the Queen of Xatris.
Willy the Mad (MadWilly) - One of the employess of Imperial Library. Willy is a good friend of Kviz. Soldier #1 - lesplaydices Soldier #2,#3, #4 - some random noobs Captain - some random noob It was so quiet that you could hear a pindrop, but silence never lasts long. Fast and light footsteps disturbed the silence. Whoever it was, he was in hurry. Kviz had only one thought in his mind : "I must reach the queen as fast as I can. Xatris is in danger. I'm just glad that my senses did not failed me." Although, two hours before the current events, Kviz was walking down the gallery. He just could not believe that all those things were a drill. "Why would they do a drill like that? We wasted huge amounts of energy shooting into 'nothing' and we were being hurried all the time. Right after the 'supposed' ship was destroyed, we had been told that it was only a drill. Something does not fit here. I think I have to check all this out right now." Kviz quickly darted throught the gallery and ran into his friend's chamber. Willy the Mad was sitting on his sofa and napping. Kviz looked at his friend's body, which looked weak and didn't have any muscles. Willy the Mad was very slim and it looked like if wind blew, he would have been blown away. "Am I sure he can do it?" - Kviz started to have second thoughts, but there was no time and Kviz had only 1 option. - "Willy, wake up! Now! Xatris needs your help." - Kviz started waking Willy up. It did not take too much time and they both were near the Library's Info Center, which was guarded by 4 soldiers by the entrance. - "Ok Willy, here's the plan. You will go and distract them while I get into the center and see what is...Willy? WILLY?!" But Willy was not called Willy the Mad for nothing. He did not even listen to Kviz's advice, but instead just jumped out and took all 4 soldiers on. Needless to say, he killed first 2 with the element of surprise. The other two were shocked and died just a second after. - "There, it's done, it's finished"- exclaimed Willy. - "Ok Willy, guard the position. I wont need much time." Kviz hurried into the Info Center. He knew that it was lunch time and that the center would be empty. He had never been there before and was very surprised : It was a huge chamber with monitors, computers, holograms, and service droids all over it. - "So this is the main Command Center of Xatris...."- Kviz was amazed. But he didn't waste much time on sightseeing and ran to the bigger computer with a huge hologram. Someone had not turned the program off and Kviz saw something, that disturbed him deeply. "There is no time to waste!" that was the only thought in Kviz's head. --------------------------------------------- Kviz was running out of breath, but he was almost there. He knew that Willy the Mad was running beside him, even though couldn't hear his breathing, nor his footsteps... They reached the final outpost before the Queen chambers. Kviz had a special pass to see the Queen at any time, but a captain, which was guarding the chambers, was new. - "I am Kviz, Royal Historian of Xatris, and I must see the Queen right now. Its a very important matter."- Kviz almost yelled the last words. - "I am sorry. Whoever you are, Queen has ordered that no one would disturb her." - The captain said calmly. - "Here is the pass. Just look at it" - sighed Kviz. Captain took the pass and studied it for about a minute. Kviz was losing his patience. Finally, some words came from captains mouth : - "Proceed. But remember, if she will be mad, you shall be beheaded. Good luck, SIR!" (the last words where filled with hatred) And Kviz proceeded through the door... Previous chapters : Prologue (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764045) Chapter 1 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764078) Chapter 2 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764093) |
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nuflis wrote
at 2:42 PM, Monday August 4, 2008 EDT Hmmm, interesting.
Anyway, I'm probably "lost in translation", but I need some clarifications. 1/ Xatris is the "rebel" planet, where the Queen lives, etc... then why Willy killed the soldiers? Is the planet occupied by enemies? 2/ In the same sense, if that's not the case, why Kviz (the Royal Historian) does not have access to the Library's Info Center? On a side note: if les was soldier 1, then he's been killed in round 3? lol. Lol unlucky, I'm enjoying this. KEEP IT COMING. |
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unlucky9999 wrote
at 2:55 PM, Monday August 4, 2008 EDT 1) Xatris is an independent planet in Inner Rim which is ruled by Xatris Royal Family (The Queen). Kviz that someting was going and he wanted to check it out, but he didnt have the access to the Info Center, so he needed help. Kviz had only 1 person he could trust and it was Willy the Mad. Now to asnwer the question why Willy killed the soldiers : Kviz did not wanted the soldier to be killed and he just wanted to distract them, but Willy didnt used logic and just killed them :)
2) Cause that Info Center is sorta a command center and it is mainly used by miliatary. Kviz has the access, but only with a person who supervises him and it wouldnt have not worked in this case, cause they would have covered the info |
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manbearpig wrote
at 3:38 PM, Monday August 4, 2008 EDT I eagerly await more of the story. :D
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Johnson213 wrote
at 9:55 PM, Monday August 4, 2008 EDT this is the hottest freaking story i ever read...I love the part where the nuns undress and then you know what happens...
I gotta take a cold shower... |
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jurgen wrote
at 4:03 AM, Tuesday August 5, 2008 EDT I am so glad for captain Lager he already got a part in this epic saga... although I wouldn't dare call him a random noob myself
and attacking 4 soldiers at the same time sure sounds like Willy P.S. I just finished proofreading chapters 7 and 8 ... oh boy oh boy, this story will become epic! |
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SarahPlaying wrote
at 1:24 PM, Friday August 8, 2008 EDT Seriously Tom, great job writing this. Is a pleasure to read and seems I am not alone in thinking so.
Must say, my favourite character is Kviz :). Keep on writing or we will all PGE you. Thank you for the entertainment :). Mutter, rebels... I am, rebels. Subtle enough? Have fun :). |